The book-dummy for my Instant Nomad series is now into the next phase; testing various images to determine how to strength my narrative about travel and anxiety. Last week I was discussing and evaluating various staged photographs that I had created. I have considered using the photo above, which has been included, then replaced, and I am still evaluating it for the subtle qualities to elicit visual tension.
In retrospect, there a some aspects of this photo that I really like. The things in the image that don’t work as well for me are driving me nuts. When traveling you rarely get an opportunity to evaluate your hotel room, and so making do with what you find. This room had an interesting little porch area, but I had not realized how the lighter porch overhang would show up in this night photo. If I had a chance for a do-over, I would have raised the camera tripod higher to eliminate that overhang but that would have also truncated the far towering office building.
That odd colored night sky has been vexing to adjust, although the unnatural colors created by all the city lights does make this a bit more surreal, thus it is becoming an interesting aspect that is growing on me. Nevertheless, I will probably spend a little bit more time tweaking the content of this photo, perhaps evaluating a black and white version or cloning out the light colored outside overhead.
May 7th – 29th, 2021, Southeast Center for Photography (SEC4P), Greenville, South Carolina. A group photographic exhibition on the theme of Flora, juried by Wendi Schneider. Opening concurrent with Greenville’s First Friday events while there will not be a formal artists reception of this exhibition due to the pandemic.